Chapter 3: Page 17
Thali’s room. And look! you get to see what their underclothes look like. Very raunchy, I know.
I actually have an “extras” page I want to throw up sometime about the dark grey layer of clothing in the uniforms. It’s silk-like so it holds heat well and is adjustable in fit and lengths… but magically impervious/neutral, adding a built in layer of protection in case some novice accidentally sets themselves on fire. :D
Magic retardant under-armor is good stuff.
I don’t feel anything wrong with the sword, Lenya, unless you count perspective issues, but I think I shouldn’t. XD
It doesn’t feel like the dialog in the first two panels flows right. I can’t quite place my finger on it, but something about it is off
I’m also not sure what line comes first.
Figured it out!
Middle right and top right need to switch places.
Umm… Doesn’t that count as stealing? I mean, I would abandon the sword to avoid extra trouble…
Abandon it maybe but not drop it in the path of someone who threatened you so they can pick it up again :)